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What do I want in a digital camera?

Canon PowerShot SD850 IS 8.0 MP Digital Elph Camera with 4x Optical Image Stabilized Zoom

Criteria	Evidence	Judgment
1. # of pixels-photo quality	8 pixels (define)	Good, should give good quality photos up to 8x10 prints, even poster size
2. Automatic features exposure shutter speed zoom/telephoto lense	Camera fully automatic and can also be manually operated	Easy to use features for both beginner and experienced photographer
3. Price	$263. $50.rebate	Must also pay for shopping: 9.95 plus .99 per pound -Rebate good only with Amazon.com and for Cannon printer. -shipping expensive -not dealing with amazon.com directly, outside vender

Now Write Your Topic Sentences for Your Outline

Topic Sentence: With digital cameras, number of pixels determine the size the quality of the photograph.

Topic Sentence: Many beginning photographers will appreciate the automatic features that many digital cameras offer.

Topic Sentence: Finally, photographers need to consider price when they shop for a digital camera.

Next, Write Your Thesis Sentence. Follow these criteria for your thesis

Thesis will:

Target a specific audience

Be written in active voice

State criteria in grammatical parallel structure

Make a judgment about the product or item evaluated

Photographers looking to buy their first digital camera should consider the Cannon SD850 because it offers superb 8 pixel technology, has easy to use automatic features, and can be purchased for under $300.

Photographers looking to buy their first digital camera will love the Cannon SD850 for these reasons: it offers superb 8 pixel technology, it has easy to use automatic features, and it can be purchased for under $300.

Essay will be 4-4.5 pages

Document any research using MLA

Rough Draft due Friday, Nov. 2

Final Draft due Wednesday, Nov. 7

Include rough draft

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